In the first two weeks of term, 4EB @RF have used the book *What We’ll Build* by Oliver Jeffers as inspiration to write persuasive letters to Mr. Ball, asking him to allow us to build a vegetable patch on the school grounds. The book’s themes of creating and building together motivated us to think about how we could improve our school environment in a meaningful way. We applied persuasive writing skills, including coming up with strong arguments and supporting them with clear reasons. We used emotional appeal by highlighting how the vegetable patch would benefit both students and the environment, while also incorporating facts about healthy eating and sustainability. Additionally, we practised using formal language and structuring our letters with an introduction, reasons, and a conclusion. Through peer reviews, we refined our writing, ensuring our letters were compelling and error-free before sending them to Mr. Ball for consideration. I am very proud of how much effort the pupils of 4EB have put into their first big write of the school year. Well done year 4! 

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